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Apple
ReplyDeleteApple is kind of fruits that very benefit for our healthy and delicious. At first, apple grow in Peru and then expand in other place belong to Indonesia. Apple can life in mineral rich mountain and place that suitable to plant it is in Batu, Malang and Nongkojajar. Apple is picking once in three month. Each apple contains of vitamin A, vitamin B-complex, mineral, low fat and many others. These compounds help us to avoid diseases and protect from free radical. Moreover, skin of apple compound a vitamin so, will be better if we eat apple without peel it but don’t forget to wash at first. We know that many kinds of apple either in our country or in other country, such as green apple, red apple, golden apple, Gala apple and Granny Smith. Apple is selling in many places, such as market, super market or trade. It makes us find apple easily and everyday is available. We can eat apple directly, make as juice, pie or chips. We must consume apple as supplement nutrition besides main food because we get many advantages from it.
Tanjung Benoa
ReplyDeleteTanjung Benoa just north of Nusa Dua has become much busier over the years. It has a wide range of accommodation including prestigious resort. Tanjung Benoa is a scenic 5 kilometers of coconut palms and fine sand. The area is the almost exclusive home of luxury hotels, private villas, fine restaurants, cafes and water sports facilities. The resort has become busier over recent years with more hotels Bali Resort and Spa joining impressive resorts. The shape of the beach, also makes Tanjung Benoa perfect for water sports with no shortage of shops catering to marine sports enthusiasts.
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Game
ReplyDeleteGame is the most attractive and fun thing in this era. This day you can find many kind of game outside from adventure, fighting, and many more modes. Because those, you’ll find wonderful time with game stay on your side. If you get bored, sad, and feel lonely let the cable plugged on and your game will entertain you well. Beside game can give you fun points, it can give you bad points. If you get addicted you’ll start to forget everything around of you for example, your lesson, family, friends and even your health. When that happen your school in ruin, you’ll abondened by your friends, your parents’ll get angry, and you’ll get sick. You may play your games for anytime you want but try to manage your time for other. As a result, game is not your future but your feature.
Having Boy or Girl Friend
ReplyDeleteHaving boy or girl friend has many advantages. I think all of teenagers ever feel it. Actually, having boy or girl friend can make spirit to study. When we got a same class, we don’t want to look stupid. Therefore, we have more to study to get good markand can answerthe teacher’s answer. On the other hand, it can teach us about how to respect each other, loyalty, take good care our boy or girl friend feeling, be good listener, sacrifice, and patient. As a result, you will find happiness, if you become a good boy or girl friend.
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Education in global era
ReplyDeleteIn global era, the teachers are not confused for teach their student again. With progress of technology information, the assignment of teacher become easy. For example a computer. Besides a computer is a high technology, it has many advantages. Now, the teachers are not write down in white board. In addition, they not must bring so much book for material teach. Through a presentation slide, the teachers only need a flash disk. Moreover, they only need a projector. Accordingly, the way of teach can be interesting. Furthermore, it able to improve skills of the students. As a result, used high technology is simpler than used low technology.
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ReplyDeleteFriendship Become Love
ReplyDeleteHaving close friend with different gender with us sometimes can be someone that we love. Most of teenage boys prefer to have the girl close friends, because girls always listening, understanding, and more sensitive to know what their friend's feeling. In addition most of teenage girls prefer to have the boy close friends, because boys often solve the problems, care, and save their close friends from someone who make their friends hurt. However the girls or boys who have best friend with different gender with them long by long will feel love each other, because they often meet, go somewhere, and spent their time together. Sometimes they give some signal to prove that they love their best friend, but some of them prefer to just keep their feeling to keep their relation friendship. Actually most of them always lie to their selves that they love each other.
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love
ReplyDeletelove is the precious emotion of human beings. it's can make a wine become vinegar, make sadly to be cheerful, to change the weak become strong. In addition, I believe in true love, because true love will never die, it's will grow anywhere, anytime. you are very lucky that you kind true love. I have been in love before and it's only about him and I. It's just like the world is only for both of us. Love is a miracle if you believe it.
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ReplyDeleteBad and Good Of Internet
ReplyDeleteAs far as u know internet can’t separate from our life at this time. Because internet can be used for search anything, we also can search any information from internet, like information for our assignment, information about game, information about news and etc. Internet also can be used for download music, film, video and etc. Those are about good of internet, and I want to tell you about bad of internet. In fact internet can be used for search any information, besides good information internet can also be used to search bad information, like adult website, adult picture, adult movie, and etc. For example, if adult movie is opened by children it can influence their mind and their morale. As a result, internet is good to be our partner as knowledge solver but don’t use it in wrong way that can change us to bad.
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ReplyDeleteHOW TO MAKE A GOOD PARAGRAPH
How to make a good paragraph? I think that question always stay in our mind. A good paragraph have at least six sentences. When we try to make a paragraph we have to choose a good topic sentence. A good topic sentence should include one clear topic and an opinion or idea about the topic. It’s should not be too broad and too narrow. After that we should write a main idea that related the topic. Usually in academic writing, a paragraph has a topic sentence that directly tells the main idea. Besides the main idea, we have write the supporting sentences. These supporting sentences will give more information about the topic. We have to write logically sentences, so the reader can easily understand what the writer wants to say. The last is a concluding sentence, it will conclude the purpose of the paragraph. By followed those steps we can make a good paragraph easily and the reader can understand what we had written.
Atmosphere in the inter-city bus
ReplyDeleteInter-city bus is one of the most popular public transportation for me. It has special atmosphere, exactly comes from hawkers. When the situation feels so hot and stuffy with the smell of passengers, they come one by one until the bus full of them. They shout, move back and forth carry on shoulder. I like that moment, because sometime it could entertain me. Each hawker has special way to vend, depend on what they sell. More or less like this atmosphere, “ ‘...yang panas-yang panas… .’, ‘…tahunya-tahunya… .’, ‘…es dingin-es dingin… .’, ‘…kipas-kipas kipas-kipas… .’, ‘…sayang anak-sayang anak lima ribuan-lima ribuan sayang anak… .’, ‘…onde-onde panas onde-onde panas… .’, ‘…kacang-kacang kacang-kacang masih anget masih anget….’ “. They do that with their special accent. Don’t you know when they shout together and ignoring the other hawkers, their voice seems like united that really funny. I always smile alone by myself and imagine how nice they were. They serve us when we need something. They were not only as hero in crowded situation on the bus, but also entertain me when I feel so bored sitting on the bus with people that unfamiliar and my long goal distance.
Minak Jinggo is a beautiful hotel in my city. It is a four star hotel. It is located in the downtown. The hotel is not very big but the architecture is very beautiful. It looks like a classic castle in London. It has 50 rooms, a fancy restaurant. It has sports facilities including a swimming pool, tennis court and gym. There are also a coffee shop and karaoke room. The rooms look very comfortable. They contain a big spring bed with big pillows, a nice sofa, a wardrobe and a big television. The bathroom is not very big but it has a bath-tub with hot and cold water. Therefore, guests can bath in this bathroom comfortably. If you have a plan to visit Banyuwangi, make sure you spend a little of your time to stay in this hotel.
ReplyDeleteAlas Purwo National Park
ReplyDeleteAlas Purwo National Park is one recommended place for traveller when in Banyuwangi. It has many interesting place especially for beaches. There are many kinds of beaches which has different panorama. Pancur, Trianggulasi, Ngagelan, and Plengkung are the name of the beaches. There is a tortoise breeding in Ngagelan beach,you can learn their life by take a look when the tortoise lay eggs in sand. If you like surfing, you can visit Plengkung beach, this is paradise for the surfers. Plengkung has different name for surfers, they call Plengkung with G-land because of the place is like G font in alphabet. Plengkung is the second amazing place in the world which has a great wave after Hawaii. The wave is big, high, and long, so the surfers often visited this place for many times just for surfing. However, Plengkung is dirty and very difficult to going there. To visit this place you must pay Rp.100.000 for transportation. You can’t use your car because the road is muddy and extreme, so You can going camping in Pancur beach if you don’t want going there. Pancur beach is camping area because this place is flat and have many facilities like water resources, canteen, mosque , and great panorama. Near Pancur beach you can see Mangrove forest, you can hunting for fish, vegetables, then you can cook for your dinner in tent. You can find some animals here like lizard, Ajag, bull, deer, and peacock. Endemic plant here is Bogem and Sadeng, that’s original plant from Alas Purwo. There are many kinds of interesting place in Alas Purwo, so I recommend you to visit this place, i guarantee that you will satisfied.
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Fun With Cycling
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favorite hobby ? I have one healthy hobby, that is cycling. Cycling is very fun activity. It can keep our health, keep the place around us from pollution, refresh our mind, and minimize the effect of global warming for example, held a car free day event to replace it with cycling. Cycling will give you a lot of new friends, new experience, join and share with biker communities, and many more. Cycling has many functions for our health.
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ReplyDeleteFun With Cycling
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favorite hobby ? I have one healthy hobby, that is cycling. Cycling is very fun activity. It can keep our health, keep the place around us from pollution, refresh our mind, and minimize the effect of global warming for example, held a car free day event to replace it with cycling. Cycling will give you a lot of new friends, new experience, join and share with biker communities, and many more. Cycling has many functions for our health.
7 Simple Ways to save our earth
ReplyDeleteThe weather of our beloved earth is increasingly uncertain. Now hot, but every few hours later could have been heavy rains. We should realize that our lifestyle should be corrected because it is very detrimental to the environment and make this beloved earth experiencing global warming. There are some easy and simple ways that we can do to save our earth. The first one is do not throw litter. This sentence has often we see everywhere and the purpose is to remind us to dispose of waste in place. Just imagine, one carelessly dispose of garbage in a day we can make the flood when there are 100 people who throw litter and was done every day. The second, close car or a room when turning on the AC. This is because the AC containing Freon or CFCs. These gases could make the earth's ozone layer eroded. Therefore, people often say that closing the car door and door’s room when turned on the AC because it is not good for our ozone layer. The third, buy a place of their own food or drinks (food grade quality) avoid the use of the foods made from disposable plastic and Styrofoam. Styrofoam is a difficult thing breaks down if it is discarded. Fourth is saving electricity. Do the activities of charging mobile phones or laptop if the battery is completely discharged. Unplug the charger from the wall socket when the battery is full for electricity does not flow continues. This also can be done when we use other electronic goods. Sixth, use as much as possible public transportation to travel. In Indonesia it has too many users of private vehicles, in addition to making jams; carbon monoxide generated can erode the ozone layer. By using public transport then at least carbon monoxide production can be reduced. And the last is, use water economically. Use water when absolutely necessary. When taking a bath, turn on the faucet water bath is complete when all activities, thus, in the development of a month we could save a few gallons of water. Seven easy ways above is easy to do when we have a strong intention to keep our earth. We can start it from ourselves first and then invite the people closest to (family, friends) to together to do this.
Food for health
ReplyDeleteHealthy food is very important for us especially in dormitory. We, as a student that live in dormitory often forget about the healthy of our food. Many of us that belittle about our food, we think that our food that we consume every day is okay, there is no problem. But, if we attention with the situation or condition of place that we buy the food, we must know how clean and hygienic that place. It is okay if we buy the food from a place that about clean and hygienic, if not? Or if we buy in a stall on edge way, is that stall clean and hygienic? We can not know about that. We also know that we as a student is have not enough money to buy a healthy food, because it is very expensive for us, but we must choose, at least in a clean or hygienic place. So, we must keep our health from small part like our habits about food, if our stomach is health, our body also health too.
The impact of extracurricular
ReplyDeleteMany students are follow the extracurricular at their school. There are such as basketball, volley, theater, rock climbing, PMR, etc. Every extracurricular have a different discussion and application. For example, extracurricular need many time to get good results; it definitely will affect students' learning process. Students who usually have free time, now became increasingly busy, so many lessons not follow in school. In fact, sometimes the students’ values are declining. To overcome, students must manage study time and extracurricular time. Because someone who follows an organization they will get experience and new knowledge, but also can accept the risk if they are really busy. On the other hand, students also more discipline to do something, so all tasks are not forgotten. Therefore, students should be able to make it all balanced between school and extra time.
Toothache
ReplyDeletePlease, brush your teeth before go to bed! It is a common advice when we were child. Sometimes, some people don’t have a good respond about it. After they doing so many activities, they feel very tired. As a result, they go to bed without brush their teeth. This bad habit causes toothache. Do you ever get toothache? Do you ever feel it? Oh my god, me myself ever felt it. For me, broken heart is better than toothache. It is very terrible. Although only one of your teeth that has a problem, you will get sick in all of your body. You will also get difficulty when eating. A delicious meal will be tasteless. Actually, you want to lose your pain by sleeping, but your pain will make you awake all night. In addition, you will be very sensitive in some conditions as like a woman that get PMS. However, this condition also gives me a good effect. I lose some of my weight when I got toothache even though I don’t want to feel it again. Accordingly, don’t be lazy to brush your teeth, specially before go to bed.
Basketball is an active sport that also fun to play.It keeps individuals in good health by developing muscle,improving circulation and increasing lung power. It takes their mind off their problem while they are concentrating on the game. They think of nothing else except how to perform as well as possible. And when they get home exhausted, a good sleep usually clears their head and they are ready with new solution.Basketball gives them a lot of opportunities to make new friend when new boys or girls join in and they go to out town meetings. But more important than all of these,basketball has helped a lot of young people become new person.They have learn to play by rules and have learned to accept defeat well.It's no wonder that basketball remains popular among the young people.
ReplyDeleteFriendship
ReplyDeleteA friend is the one who able to be with us in every conditions,happiness and sadness. When we have any problem,we can share with our friends. In addition,a friend can give suggestions for us. When we tell any problem to them,it can make us fell roomy and decrease our problems. When we happy ,we can tell happy strory to them and laugh together. A true friend is the one who always accept us in happiness and sadness,no matter who we are.
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Love
ReplyDeleteWhat is love ? Nobody knows about what the exactly meaning of love. Some people say “Love is blind”, but the others say “Love is the most beautiful feeling in the world”. In addition, there are many ways to symbolize love, such as through poems, songs, flowers, etc. Nowadays, many people do something in the name of love, but sometimes it’s only become a reason and has bad effects. For example, many young people do free sex because they think that they do it for love. However, that is wrong thought. If they do love to their mates, they will wait until they married. In other hand, actually, we already feel true love from our parent’s love which is given to us since we are in the womb until unlimited. They take care of us and teach us lovingly. For me, love is a feeling which can teach us about how to give purely without expect something as a reward.
Shopping
ReplyDeleteShopping is my hobby; I spend my spare time for shopping. I went shopping once a week. Shopping make me forget the problem that exist. I just feel fun and enjoy my activity. Although I don’t have money, I stay away to go shopping, I just take a look for new model. I always want to shopping, if in one a week I don’t visiting shoe store. But when I shopping I don’t spend money shopping. Because I just make shopping to forget my problem. But it doesn’t always like that, I still go shopping if there is what I need. My favorite place for shopping is shoe store, my eyes lit up when I see a new beautiful model of shoes. I always try all shoes in the store. At least I’ve tried although I couldn’t buy. So, shopping can refresh our mind. Make me happy, and understand the latest models.
THE POST OFFICE
ReplyDeleteA post office has an important role in the modern century. Though there are a lot of means of communications such as: telephone, television, handphone, and computer. The post office is still needed by people for the cheap public service. The post office sends and receives various of letters such as: post cards, aero grams, cables, postal orders, surface mails, registered letters. The post office also provides stamps, revenue stamps, envelopes. We can also pay the electric bill, the installment of the house or save money in the post office. I think most of people will be comfortable if save the money in the post office.
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FILM AND THEATRE
ReplyDeletePeople watch films for different purpose. Some of them need a recreation but the others regard as a hobby. Watching film make them happy, disappointed, sad. Sometimes films also support their lives.We usually see the movies in cinema or on television programs. Nowadays there are some kinds of theatres. In ‘Drive in Theatre’ we can park our car in a wide place to enjoy the film from our car. In ‘Five in One Theatre’ we will five theatres in one building. Sometimes we watch film from a promotion car which performs a free movie in a field with a big screen. We can also enjoy the film if we have video player at home by using cassette or disc.There are some kinds of films. They are comedy,war,action, horror, love, music, or documentary films. The title of the films attrack ue to see. In indonesian films we can see “Gita Cinta dari SMA”, the actor is Rano Karno and the actress is Yessy Gusman. In foreign films, Chuck Norris, Sylvester Stallone are the movie stars in action films. But as a good citizen we should prefer national films to foreign ones.
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The Beneficial of SPA Treatment
ReplyDeleteI want to tell you about benefits of SPA treatment.Do you know what SPA treatment is? Now I will explains what is SPA.SPA is one of skin treatment like body massage to make our skin,body,and mind so fresh. With SPA you don't only come away looking beautiful,but you can come away feeling healthier.Why?because with SPA,our skin get to become healthy,looking natural and younger.SPA also improves the circulation of the blood and help to relieve stress and improve the detoxifying.The benefits from having a proper spa treatment are enhancing spiritual awareness,increase the body’s energy flow,improving flexibility of our body,reducing high blood pressure and hypertension,healing emotional distress,reduce the effects of ageing,soothing our tired muscles,toning and nourishing the skin,detoxifying our body,stimulating circulation,reducing weight and weight-related problems,reducing insomnia, stress and fatigue.So, I think we can do this treatment for our body in this life.Actually there are many more benefits SPA. We ought to try it.
HOLIDAY
ReplyDeleteHoliday is the time that we have to do everything we want and we can free from our study schedule. In a holiday is possible to you to take a rest or having fun. Stay at home in a holiday is not really good because it will make your feeling so bad. However, you can change your bad time to be better with do some activity like have a vacation, climbing, swimming, shoping etc. Almost all of the people will be happy if they have time to relax (Holiday). Actually, you have many options to make your holiday have great, just choose that you like. If you want to go out from your house, you must be prepare yourself about a bad situation may happen on the way, like crowded people, trafict jam, hot condition, waiting for a queue, tired or loosing you control. On the other hand, that’s will be right because you have funniest day in your holiday. So, don’t be passive! Just try to make your holiday great with do something that can make enjoy yourself.
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FACEBOOK
ReplyDeleteDid you ever hear and know about facebook? Of course you know and always hear about this social network. Facebook is a social network which connects us with our friends. Someone who has a facebook account looks cool, educated, and smart. Everybody has a facebook account even from teenagers till a person who’s 45 years old. I consider that the function of facebook is just like a diary, but actually it more than a diary. You may write anything what you feel on facebook and let everybody knows it. Not only write anything what you feel you also can post your photos in your special moments. When you write a status or post your photos and then your friend will write their comment about your status or about your photos. When you reply their comment, it just look like a communication. So, facebook’s function is just like a sharing place.
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HAIR STYLE
ReplyDeleteWhen we are talking about hair style I so conscious, why? Because, there are a lot of hair style that used by teenagers and everybody and the treatment for hair style is really expensive. Want to looks different by treatment or giving a wonderful color and look cool. There is new style that is not expensive and not spend a lot of money for treatment by our self. There’s so many model, for example we try to copy the idol. Hair style or artist and new trend now. That style called emo, harajuku, and many others. All style depend on the person suite or not use that style and also there are some style. Short hair because can be look fresh. Also some hair style very short and many the other style.
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ReplyDeleteKorean Lifestyle
ReplyDeleteDo you know what is korea? Korea is a large country and has many mountains. The air is cool and cold. Korea has four mountains. Korean people highly value the value of modesty. They have to bow when meeting other people who they know as a sign of greeting. Korean traditional houses made of wood, stone, tile, and clay. Their house is always equipped with floor heating "Ondol". For citizens of Korean food is rice and soup but the most popular is GIMCHI. In other words gimchi and korea can not be separated. And the most interesting part of korea is clothes and dance. Hanbok is traditional Korean clothes which had been used since ancient times and is equipped with a hat called GWANMO. To dance is called JEONGJAEMU used for banquets and Confucian ritual. I think that korea has many unique lifestyle and it make different among the other countrys.
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nice posts guys....those who have not posted anything please do...coz I'm gonna consider these as part of your rated assignments....
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Carrot
ReplyDeleteCarrot is a vegetable that is easy to get and very cheap but very much beneficial for the healt of our bodies. There are some people especially don’t like this vegetable because don’t know the benefit of carrot are very rich in vitamins. There are some parent overcome this problem by making juice for the family and beloved children.
There are some benefits carrots you need to know :
• Overcoming fever in children
Take 200 grams of carrots and then wash clean. Grater and squeeze until the juice out. Water boiled juice Drink while warm.
• Overcoming burns
Crushed carrots until smooth and rub on burns. Do it as often until wound isn’t hot.
• Overcoming painful menstruation
250 grams carrots washed and cut of pieces. Add a little water. Then blender. Try to drink at least 2 times a day.
Hopefully,by knowing these benefits,you and your family can be more like carrots.
By Riska Lanvie Yanuarista
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MIDNIGHT
ReplyDeleteIn the middle of night is a time that usually we used to get a sleep. We sleep at night because from the morning till afternoon we have a tired time and night is time to take a rest. Almost all of people have activity in their day, for work or study. We know that from the morning till afternoon is a noisy time, because at that time all of activity is on. If you want to have good time to think about your work, problem, or your study work. I recommended you to do that in the middle of night. Why in the middle of night? Because, in the middle of night is a quite time, no noisy or another loud voice. So, you can think so clear without something will disturb. You can fell the nature, wind, and beautiful scenary in the sky like star, moon, also meteor if you are a lucky guy. The quite night will help your mind to get some solutions and some idea. So, if you want to have a piece time to make your mind relax, you can wake up in the middle of night and enjoy it.
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