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We can not live alone
ReplyDeleteWe are as human being can not live alone, we always depend on other people. Therefore, we are called Homo Socius. In everything in our life we need other people. For instance, when we are born, we need a mother to treat us. When we want to play, we need friends to accompany us. we need teachers, to teach us some lessons, etc. We can imagine if we live in this world just by our selves. There is no body to accompany us to play, to chat, or to help us in something. There is no body loves us. we would feel so lonely and difficult, wouldn't we? Everyone has important position in our life,so we have to give our respect to them.
Improving English skills is a good way to master English. As we have known, there are four skills of English. They are listening, speaking, reading, and writing skill. We can listen to native speaker’s conversation to increase our ability in listening. Then, try to retell the main point gotten from their conversation. Reading book or novel a lot can help us to make our reading skill better. When we have already read a book or a novel, try to summarize or make a synopsis of the story. Those are the ways to increase our skills in English. In conclusion, if then we are accustomed to do those activities above, our English skills will be better day by day. Therefore, we can master English as well.
ReplyDeleteTaj Mahal
ReplyDeleteTaj Mahal in one of the seven wonders of the world. It impresses many people because it is the symbol of love from a husband to his wife. Taj Mahal stands in the city of Arga, in the northern Indian state of Uttrar Pradesh, on the banks of the Yamuna River. It was built in the memory of the beautiful Mumtaz Mahal, who won the heart of a Mughal prince, Shah Jahar. Muntaz Mahal died during the birth of their child, Gauhara Begum. The construction of Taj Mahal was begun soon after Mumtaz’s death. The focus of Taj Mahal is the white marble tomb. Four minarets frame the tomb. Meanwhile, the main chamber houses the cenotaphs of Muntaz Mahal and her husband, with their graves located on lower level.
Bondowoso is a special city in East Java. In Bondowoso, there are some favorite and delicious foods. They are Mafin, Prol Tape, Tape Bakar,and others. Moreover, Bondowoso has some beautiful places and sight-seeing.They are Kawah Ijen,Waduk Sampean Baru,Arak-arak sight seeing, and Tancak Kembar waterfall.In Waduk Sampean Baru, we can enjoy a waterfall, a beautiful flower garden, and Luwak coffee.Besides, if we visit Waduk Sampean Baru, we can enjoy sailing on the river.Other that,Arak-arak sightseeing show us a beautiful sightseeing. Therefore, Bondowoso is very potential to develop like Bali.
ReplyDeleteCARROT
ReplyDeleteCarrots are good for our health. Carrots contain a very complete nutrition to provide our body the essential enzymes, minerals, and vitamins. In addition, carrot also good source of vitamin B1, vitamin B2, vitamin B6, vitamin C, vitamin K, biotin, potassium, thiamine and also source of beta carotene. Thus, carrots are good for our health, for the example it’s good for our spleen, stomach, fights against free radical cause of group of vitamin B, reduce high blood pressure, reduce cholesterol, prevention from heart attacks, cancer, stroke, improves eyesight and also good for our skin because make our skin smoother, softer, and firmer. Beside that, carrot has good amount of natural sugar. We can consume it as a carrot juice or raw carrot. Drinking carrot juice also as well as eating carrot because the taste is also sweet. Consume fresh carrot a day can improve overall ourselves healthy. That’s why carrots are good for our health and let’s begin to consume carrot everyday.
Harry Potter
ReplyDeleteHarry potter is the most familiar novel in the world, included the genre of fantasy. Moreover with contain mystery, adventure, and also romance. Harry potter is mostly set in Hogwarts, a boarding magic school in England for the wizards .In the each of book, harry struggles with the problems he encounter, and dealing with them often involves the need to violate some school rules, punishment in the case which caught out, being disciplinary stipulated in the rule of Hogwarts. However, the stories reach their climax in the summer term, near of just after the final exam, when incident increase far beyond school squabbles and struggles, and harry must face Voldemort both or one his followers, the death eaters ( pelahap maut ), whit the best matter of life and death as the series progresses. By one and more character that died in each of final four books. The consequence he learns important lesson through exposition and discussions with head teacher and mentor Albus Dumledore. at the end of the novel harry potter series with the title harry potter and the deathly hollow. Harry and his friends spend most of the time away from the Hogwarts, and only go back there to face Voldemort at the end of the novel. So I think this novel is very interesting and very tighy .
Annisa
ReplyDeleteSPONGEBOB SQUARE PANT
Sponge Bob Square Pant is one of the most popular cartoons that present everyday in Global TV.As his name, Sponge Bob is a yellow sponge with many hole everywhere, and especially with his sexy square pant. He present with his stupid, strange, unique and funny behavior. Thus it can make everyone who watches his action will have fits of roaring laughter at the funny parts. Begin from his friend, Squid word as his partner in Crabby Patty that is never hold out of Sponge Bob’s action.
More over a distended crab, as the owner of Crabby Patty, Mr. Crab as we know that he has a freak green eyes whenever he faces with abundance of money. The yellow sponge lives with his pretty snail; Gerry that is has sounds like meowing and he spend his craziness with the strange one and also his soul mate, Patrick the star fish. Sandy, a cute squirrel from Alaska is also joining to give the different unique thing in this favorite program. Everything that present in Sponge Bob Square Pant is ridiculous and it has special cuteness for cartoon lovers.
Natural Disaster
ReplyDeleteA natural disaster is a terrible accident, example a great flood. It usually causes great suffering and the casualties are injured or died. Floods occur when the water of rivers, lakes, or streams over flow their banks and pour out into the surrounding land. Many different things cause floods. Often-heavy rainstorms that last for a brief time can cause a flood. However not all of heavy storms are followed by flooding. If the surrounding land is flat and can absorb the water, flood will not occur. On the contrary, if the land is hard and heavy rain cannot be absorbed, flood will occur. When flood occurs, the destruction of the surrounding land can be severe. Villages and towns are swept away by water pouring swiftly over the land. Flood can occur whenever, so we must wary on it.
The role of a mother for children is very important. A Mother has an important role to bring up and to care her children. A mother more often gather with her children than the others. Thus, a mother more understands about growth of her children than other person. Moreover a mother knower how a mother should be protects her children from the dangerous than a father. A mother must also to educate her children about live, social, etc. Thus, children need a mother who has ability and smart. As a result, a mother will able to set up her children, so children will have a good personality. Because the primary of education comes from the family. Besides, a mother can also become a friend for her children. Thus, children do not think that a mother is not dictator for them. Finally, the role of mother is important to build up the personality of the children, besides the growth of the children.
ReplyDeleteI personally think that English is the world's most important language. Why do I say that? Firstly, English is an international language. It is spoken by many people all over the world, either as the first or second language. Secondly, English is also the key to open doors to scientific and technical knowledge which is needed for the economic and politic development of many countries in the world. Thirdly, English is a top requirement of those seeking jobs. Applicants who master either active or passive English are more favorable than those who don't. From the facts above, it is obvious that everybody needs to learn English to greet the global era.
ReplyDeleteTelevision
ReplyDeleteWatching Television has advantage and disadvantage for us. Actually watching TV is fun, we can enjoy with TV’s programs in spare time. Not only that, we can get many information from news in TV. We can know what happen in the world from TV. To the company, they can advertise their product to the costumer from TV, so we are easy to know the products which we want to buy. Now, almost everybody in the world has TV, they think that it’s important thing to have.
In other hand, TV also has disadvantage for us. Especially for children, TV can be bad if they watch TV all day, it will influence their health, study, and activity. The effects of these are, they will be more inactive, lazy to do anything, and forget about their study. Parents must be careful to control what the program to their children, because many cases that children like to watch soap opera which have crime acts or crude. Not impossible if they will imitate what they see in TV, so parents must be clever to choose the TV’s program for their children. Many things that can parents do to protect their kids in order to they get the advantage from this, for example limit the time for children to watch TV, accompany them when they watch TV in order to, parents can control what they want to watch, and choose the best program for children. Besides giving advantages, TV also can give bad effects for us, especially for children.
By: VIVIN FEBRI ANGGRAINI / 100210401052
ReplyDeleteCigarette is dangerous for our health. It contains of toxic chemicals that come from tobacco such as nicotine and tar. The smoke from cigarette can cause some serious diseases such as heart attack and cancer. In addition, the smoke which is inhaled can be very dangerous for the lungs. If the lungs are fulfilled by the smoke of cigarette, they will be lack of oxygen which is very needed by our body. The smoke of cigarette is not only dangerous for the lungs but also for the human heart. If the blood is polluted by the cigarette smoke, it can make the heart get difficult to pump the blood to all parts of the body. This condition will make the heart work very hard. If it is happened in a long time, the hard will get broken and stop working. That’s why, we had better avoid smoking in order that our body still healthy.
THE EFFECT OF GLOBAL WARMING
ReplyDeleteThe effect of global warming to the environment very much. some scientist predicted that ice berg in north pole will be liquid. more ever the most island will be under water. in addition, observation show that there have been changes weather. As climate changes, the probablities of certain types of weather events are affected. Therefor, we are as people who lived in the earth, we have to keep our earth in other that the earth still being kept ever after.
Nama : Aprilia Rahmadianti
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Writing class "C"
My Dream
When I was kid, I have many dreams. My dream is to become a doctor, merchant, police woman, etc. One of my dreams also become a teacher., a professional teacher and have a lot of insight and knowledge. To make it happen, I always tried to become the number one in the class, studied hard and always active in the class. Beside that, I always look for references from outside the classroom. That's what I always participated in various training courses to be able to realize my dream of becoming a teacher. Because being a teacher is my greatest dream. The inspiration to become a teacher I got from my parents. Both of my parents are teachers. I think, that goal has been handed down to me from my parents. I promise to realize these ideals, and make my parents proud of me. Then, I suggest to everyone to try to achieve their respective dreams, never give up to achieve your dreams. Ok. Because success is yours.
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ReplyDeleteSafety riding
traffic accident in every year more and more increased. This happens due to lack of awareness of road users on road safety. Road users should pay more attention to how good a drive way so-called safety riding. First of all, check your vehicle before traveling as a state machine. braking systems, and lighting. Second, for motorcyclists should always wear a helmet and the user's car using the safety belt. third, the driver should always carry important papers relating to the vehicle, and always obey traffic signs. .as a result, all this is done in order to reduce the risk of traffic accidents.
Reading habit is poor among Indonesians because most people haven’t realized the importance of reading. By reading, one knows the world. He or she will understand what he doesn’t see by himself. Realizing the importance of reading will make someone motivated to read. When we know that something is very important because it can give us valuable information, we will try to get or do the thing. For example, a business person who always follows latest information or news will know what to do in his or her business. He will make a good decision to make a transaction. Most people in all of modern countries have realized the importance of reading and they have good reading habits. In bus and train station, waiting rooms, parks, poeple like reading. They enjoy reading which give them valuable knowledge and inspiration. The world has forced globalization. Those people with little knowledge will be left behind. To speed up the better change in this country, a good reading habit is extremely required.
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Chess boxing
ReplyDeleteChess boxing is one of 10 unique sport in the world. This sport is in Finlandia. Actually, this sport is like boxing in a general way. This sport is divided of four round which a round is eleven minutes. However, the difference of this sport with the other boxing is, it get started and finished with chess game. Thus, this sport is very interesting for the people who like an unique and extreme sport.
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When I was in junior high school, I really loved football. Every Saturday afternoon I practised in school field with my team and my coach. They were strong and smart players. My coach, Mr Paijo was a kind person. But, while he was coaching us, he was very discipline. He would grounded anyone who came late and not obeyed the team’s rules. With Mr Paijo, our team won many tournament in many big cities. Our team named after our school, 03 Team (from SMP 67) and we had many fans too, you know. Ohh, that was so cool. Now, I still love football and I still have a team too. But, my parents warn me to pay attention more to my study, football just for hobby.
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Nama : Muhammad Ridho
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Futsal
Recently, futsal is more popular sport than football in the world. We have already known that futsal is a kind of foot ball. However, why does futsal become more famous? As a result, futsal only needs five players in each team. When we play this sport, we do not use a large yard. Usually, we use a small yard like basketball yard. Therefore, we will not be tired sooner. In addition, we can communicate toward our team easily when we play it. In conclusion, futsal is simpler than football, and we can play it easily.
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ReplyDeleteName : Dedi Susanto
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Writing I / Ms. Fitri.
Because of You
My life is more useful since she is in my heart. She is like an angel for me because she makes me understand about my responsible for the future. Sometime I am not optimist when doing something, but the day after I am being with her, I am sure that this life has to be done with spirit and enjoyable thing every time. She lets me know that the people can be success if they are optimist to see the opportunity in the difficulty. Besides, the bravery can also make me success. Therefore, I am sure I can be a success man and I always optimist in my life. She is important for me because she is like a pretty angel and she can motivate me to be better.
the benefit of listening to the music
ReplyDeleteMusic is not only can entertain us.On the other hand, it has four advantages. The first, it can change our brain to processing the information better.The second, music also can increase the profit of our artery. Because music that the listener enjoyed can give the healthy for the brain. The third, music can be the media for the psychology therapy. Moreover for the forth, although just listen for a few minute, we can feel fresh again by listening to the music. As a result, music can give the new spirit for us to continue our activity.
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Children are young people who needs education for their life. Children has good barain to think something, because their brain still fresh and can to accept knowlage and information from many people and media. This time good for children learn something. Education for their life can we tell to them. Example education about using good language. About moral value, social education, and calculat of number. That is cause for parents and the other, chindren must be given good education for their brain.
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Name : Resti Lutviani C.P
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Fashion in Java
I interesting in java’s fashion. Javanese people have special traditional clothes; there are kebaya, batik, etc. First I will tell about kebaya. Kebaya is a traditional blouse-dress combination worn by women in Indonesia. Sometime kebaya is combining with material come from batik. Javanese people called kain sewek. Kebaya is symbol of softness, kindest, and elegances. I think it is very beautiful dress because the woman who uses kebaya look likes amazing, she looks beautiful and fabulous. Besides that, kind of clothes that popular in java’s fashion is batik. Batik is both an art and a craft, which is becoming more popular and well known in the West as a wonderfully creative medium. The art of decorating cloth in this way, using wax and dye, has been practiced for centuries. In Java, Indonesia, batik is part of an ancient tradition, and some of the finest batik cloth in the world is still made there. Indonesian functionary, especially man often uses batik in a formal ways. A man who uses batik is look like elegance and sturdy. Nowadays not only man uses batik because batik material is modified in many kind of clothes for example students’ uniform women’s dress etc. furthermore batik and kebaya is famous not only in our country but also in international market. International people recognizing that java’s fashion is fabulous fashion icon. It is the reason why I proud to be Javanese because Javanese people have beautiful fashion.
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ReplyDeleteMy Future
ReplyDeleteSince I was child I dreamed of becoming a successful woman but now I have problem to deciding which career field that I would like to go into. This time I studied in collage majoring in education and teacher training faculty. I studied in here because my mother wants. My mother wanted me to be a teacher, but actually I don't want to be a teacher. One day when I'm done with my studies, I hope I can find a good job. As for my career I want to be a manager in a big company because I like to organize things and I think work in a big company is provides the chance to work in another country and travel a lot. From now on I will try my best to achieve my dreams.
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Reading comic is just wasting time. The story in comic is not educating for the reader. Usually the story is just about an imagination. The reader is forced into the imagination from the comic maker which is not giving any advantages for the reader. There are quite a lot significant numbers of unimportant thing in his or her imagination that just waste time. It wastes time because it does not reflect to the real life situation and often contradict with it.
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DARA SUMARENI
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Joining Organization or Community in a College
As a student in a college, we should have activities that can increase our soft skills by joining organization or community that appropriate with our interest. Don’t waste this opportunity, because our college and our faculty have many organizations and communities. For example persma (pers mahasiswa), sport club, art club, pecinta alam, HMJ (Himpunan Mahasiswa Jurusan) and many more. After graduate from college we will have a job. As we know, when we have a job, we are not only use our knowledge from our lecturers, but also use our soft skills and our experiences. Our soft skills can make us different and give us a point plus than other person. In addition, our experiences can make us have a good communication skill. Organization and community will not disturb our study as far as we can manage our time wisely.
Jember is a potential city which is located in East Java. In Jember, there are some delicious gift for domestic or foreign tourists who visited Jember. They are suwar suwir, proltape. Furthermore, Jember has some amazing tourism places. They are Watu Ulo and Papuma beach, Tancak waterfall, Botani study and recreation place, Tea plantation, and more. Besides that, Jember has JFC ( Jember Fashion Carnival ) which is known in national and international region . As a result, Jember has many potential things that must be developed, so that Jember can be progressive city.
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ReplyDeleteName : Siti Rofi’ah
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Cristiano Ronaldo
Cristiano Ronaldo is a successful soccer player in the world. He was born in Portugal in 1985. His nick name “Ron” became famous when he joined with Manchester United in 2003. Many people said that he would be the next David Beckham. This opinion came true. He got not only Beckham’s back number but also bright career in Manchester United as bright as Beckham. His position as winger (midfield) and his dangerous shooting ability make him becomes one of the most skillful soccer players. Further, both of his feet are able to kick the ball strongly and accurately so that he can switch the position from left winger to right winger anytime. No wonder he got many Awards from FIFA as the best soccer player. In 2009 he moved to Real Madrid club with an expensive contract and up until now he is proving to his club that the contract is worth. I think he is a good example for Indonesian soccer players.
Name: Teguh Dwi A.
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Sherina
Sherina is my favorite artist. I like her from the first time I saw her in ’Petualangan Sherina’, the movie she starred when she was a kid. She is not only thinking about her career in entertainment but also her education for her future life. She has a wonderful voice. Unlike many other singer, Sherina creates her own songs to sing. Moreover, the song she created is so stunning. This singer designs her own stage costumes and does her own hair and makeup. Sherina is able to speak English well. Awesome isn’t she? Besides listening to music, She is also practicing Wushu to keep fit. I think Sherina is a good example for young generations.
Shallyntang Ditya P
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I’m sure that everyone have favorite place to spend their time, and my best place is Tanjung Papuma. Tanjung Papuma is precise place to enjoy our spare time, if you want to relax and refresh your mind you will find beautiful scenery there. Enjoy the beach and laying in white sand or take aroud in another side of Papuma and fine spread of seashore of stone and coral. Fresh air with salt smell will enter in your deep breath. Pounding wave of Hindia Ocean will make you relax and peaceful. On the other hand, when you want to combine between relax and do exercise, you can play football or volleyball beach on the seashore. Beside that, you can enjoy the water in border of the seashore and make creation with white sand. I belief you will have fun and relax in that place, and it will be your next favorite place on your list.
Shallyntang Ditya P
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Tanjung Papuma
I’m sure that everyone have favorite place to spend their time, and my best place is Tanjung Papuma. Tanjung Papuma is precise place to enjoy our spare time, if you want to relax and refresh your mind you will find beautiful scenery there. Enjoy the beach and laying in white sand or take aroud in another side of Papuma and fine spread of seashore of stone and coral. Fresh air with salt smell will enter in your deep breath. Pounding wave of Hindia Ocean will make you relax and peaceful. On the other hand, when you want to combine between relax and do exercise, you can play football or volleyball beach on the seashore. Beside that, you can enjoy the water in border of the seashore and make creation with white sand. I belief you will have fun and relax in that place, and it will be your next favorite place on your list.
Relita Mahardika
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Banana, a symbol of Lumajang, is a kind of fruit in Indonesia. It is not a seasonal fruit. This fruit can grow anytime. Banana has a yellow skin and has a unique taste. If we have problem with our digestive system, we can consume banana everyday. This fruit can help prevent stomach and colon disease. It can also help to increase fiber because this fruit has a lot of vitamin C. It is often used as ingredients of cake, traditional food like “Nagasari” and “Kripik”. There are many kinds of banana, such as Agung’s banana, Raja’s banana, Marlin’s banana and others. Most of the farmer in Lumajang can produce many bananas so Lumajang is called a Banana City.
A Special Unique Man
ReplyDeleteI have ever met a special unique man in an evening party. At the first sight, he smiled at me. I became more anxious. In addition, he came closer to me. Being near him, I could see how cool he was. He asked me slowly,”Can I know your name?”. Before answering, I looked at his face. He was very handsome with his oval face, sharp nose, blue eyes, and sexy lips. However, there was something strange with his eyebrows. They looked like girl’s which have been cut. Hmm, just forget it! I continued to look at his body that was muscular enough, but sexy. “I am Echi. Glad to meet you”, I answered by shaking hand. His hand was really soft. I could not imagine that he was mostly perfect in everything of his body. I tried to ask his name. To my surprise, he answered,”My name is Dani in the evening, especially for this time. However, you can call me Dina in the other times”. Oh my God! How pity I was to see him… Actually, he was not a girl or boy. He was a transvestite!!!
Novie Lusyana
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